Paintings in Progress - stage 5

I've tightened up the details, but more detail is still needed in both.

Neither picture has been especially popular on Flickr, perhaps because they lack the sort of clear singular images that make things stand out there.

The Yellow painting (B) makes me think of Bertie Basset. I like long titles, and may call it, "The Hero on his way to even Greater Glory". I like the Russian-ness of the title- the painting takes some things from Malevich and Rodchenko.

The Green (A) has much to do with growth and fertility. I may call it "The Garden of Earthly Delights, or Weird and Kinky"

Day 2

I think the next step will be to ensure that the lines are more or less square where it matters. There is an Aztec feel about the green picture, and I have injected something from 20s German Art in the yellow. I have a close affinity to art from the 20s and 30s.

I suppose that both pictures are self-portraits. I have been working very fast, trying to leave my judgements aside, working from something close to instinct.